Mary Hinsen, BPSA  


Butterflies by Mary Hinsen, BPSA

October 2025 - Butterflies

October 2025 - Mary Hinsen, BPSA

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About the Image(s)

Camera settings 1/250sec, f/6.3,ISO6400, 219mm
My daughter and granddaughters travelled with me to Dunedin for my September check-in at the hospital, and they wanted to visit the butterflies at the museum while we were there. It isn't an easy place to take a camera - it is very hot and has very high humidity. However, I managed to get a few shots where my lens wasn't too steamed up!
I liked this one as an action shot. I thought I'd like to experiment with butterflies in black and white, as I have always processed with a focus on colour. The treatment I am on is affecting my colour perception, so I want to start using black and white more.

These butterflies were creating an interesting shape together, with good contrast in the wings of the top butterfly.
I began by rotating the image, so that the shape the subjects created was not straight on, then cropped in. Without colour to separate subject from background, I thought about processing to suit the black and white conversion.

I copied the layer and moved the butterflies onto their own layer, so I could work on the background only. I added a white to transparent gradient at low opacity, to lighten the right-hand side. I then added a slight gaussian blur, and painted back selected foreground leaves to keep them sharper. I then darkened the lower left-hand corner with a black to white gradient and multiply blend mode, adjusting opacity until it was subtle enough. Once happy with the background, I brought the butterfly layer back, and stamped up.

The black and white conversion was then relatively simple - not much tweaking needed at all. As always, I look forward to your feedback and suggestions :)


5 comments posted




Denise McKay   Denise McKay
I like your conversion to black and white, which helps tone down the busy background. I feel that there are still some rather bright spots in the background, and on my screen the bottom dark wing of the butterfly seems too dark near the body. I played with an edit to see what would happen if I used several masks to lower the highlights on a few bright spots, then open up the shadows a bit on that dark part of the wing. I also cropped to add a little more focus on the butterflies.

Just some food for thought. I like your concept and that you saw this interesting shape while also capturing the translucence of the top butterflys wings.   Posted: 10/12/2025 17:44:44
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Mary Hinsen   Mary Hinsen
Thank you Denise! I like your edits, and your crop. This is the great thing about a group - it takes different eyes to see other possibilities.   Posted: 10/23/2025 03:28:33



Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
While I liked the color in the original, I appreciate your image in black and white also. Denise's take, with a bit more definition to the lower left background, sans hot spots, is an improvement in my estimation.
One thing that seems to bother me, is the crop. Personally, I prefer a subject to be off center, perhaps a bit to the lower right?   Posted: 10/13/2025 12:26:52



Jan Handman   Jan Handman
This is a really interesting image Mary. The B/W treatment works well since you were focusing on the shapes. I like that you blurred most of the background, except right at the area where the butterfly is holding on. I agree with Denise that the darkest wing needs a bit more definition, especially since the details on the other three wings are so nice. I think Denise's tighter crop works well too. I think your use of B/W takes the image more into the realm of fine art. Very nice!   Posted: 10/14/2025 22:18:21



Rita Johnston   Rita Johnston
Mary, these are mating butterflies? That complicates the subject. I think either the color or b&w works, and like that you took a difficult subject to work more in b&w.   Posted: 10/20/2025 16:25:51



 

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