I like the striking lines here. They focus attention on the girl and on the other people further away.
I would like to tidy the picture up by removing things like the diagonal line in the top left, the light areas on the escalator right hand side, the ceiling lights to the left of the girl, and maybe the lighter area to the right of the picture.   Posted: 07/08/2026 19:59:11

This image has a lot of things that create a strong monochrome like all the lines up and down th escalator. I agree with Stuart about the diagonal line in the ttop left, but I don't think this is a huge thing. Somehow I am thinking it would be improved if the person was closer and there was more detail in the face particuclarly. I understand that a would take a wider angle lens or backing up which might cause other issue.   Posted: 07/16/2026 23:34:32